come float with me
in my world of empty promise
i beg that you forgive me for
my transgresions in your mind
if you would only understand
that all I have i give to you
in my world of empty promise
i beg that you forgive me for
my transgresions in your mind
if you would only understand
that all I have i give to you
(c) Rob posted at 2:34 AM
1 Comments:
Just found your poetry, great stuff man. I particularly like the ones about love and desire. Do you still write poetry? You've got such talent. Such a distinctive voice with so much honesty. This one kind of reminds me of Juliane Barnes' novel "Before She Met Me." It's about a guy who becomes fixated on the life his wife lived before they met and has a hard time reconciling her past transgressions with the person he knows her to be.
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